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First off the Update: It's Not Just Sex Chapter 11: Broken
      

And I'm posting this as an un-betaed 2nd draft, (first draft betaed to the point of extensive re-write by the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] hollywoodlawn) and given a thorough proof-read by myself. I'm menrtioning this because the technique I used is something suggested by a tutor way back in my first year of uni; which is. Firstly leave it alone for a few days and come back fresh but more importantly: read it backwards. That way its easier to read the words that are actually there. Rather than picking up the meaning of the sentences while reading forward and missing that the words you've skimmed aren't the ones you think are there.

Anyway, it might be balony but it took like 3 hours. So there must be a grain of truth there somewhere. Let me know how well it worked!          

Date: 2011-09-17 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hollywoodlawn.livejournal.com
OMG, such a huge improvement! I'll leave you a proper review at AFF when I get a chance, but I really liked how it turned out.

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