Okay, okay, okay. I'm calm and collected and I'm going to leave a calm and collected comment to this absolutely LOVELY present.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!!
Of course I'm not! I'm going to have to do a great effort just to spare you an ALL CAPS review to this, because I am so SUPER excited and you just have no freaking idea!!!!!
First of all, how did you know that this is my favourite pairing?
Haha! Yes, I'm joking.
Oh, God! Have I thanked you already? Have I thanked you enough? I don't think I have, and you'll probably get random "thank you" messages from me throughout your life. This is so lovely and fantastic and I love it so much. SO MUCH.
Okay, calm and collected.. First, I LOVE the setting. And I love this incredibly hot and perfectly characterised and just plain believably little snippet in their relationship. I love the way you develop this, I love that you start from the description of Lily's room (can I just say that my heart was beating furiously already when I read the summary?!), and that that the room gives them an excuse to talk about boys in Lily's room, and that Hugo - God, I love your Hugo - would just show her that he definitely counts as a boy (yes, he does). BTW, you call him creepy, I call him a dom, and I love it.
The frottage is amazing. As always. You write the hottest frottage ever. I noticed that in Quick Puffs of Jollity and I honestly was amazed at how perfect your frottage scenes are. Like, I usually don't even understand it - like understand what most authors write - but you.. God! It's perfect, it's hot, it's gorgeous, it's... it's just plain bloody awesome. I just don't have words to describe it. Honestly. Just don't have words. It's so good. (Hahah, I have to admit that if you were Tam, I'd tell you just what that frottage scene did to me, but I don't think that's very lady-like so l should probably shut up... - Take it as a compliment though!)
I love how you've characterised them - this is so like my headcanon for them it's ridiculous. And I have never thought about Lily with a pixie cut, but now I suddenly want to cut off her hair in all of my fics. I so love that Hugo is the one to take control - well, duh - and I love that Lily would kiss him back like that and trust him completely. By the way, you're both a genius and very evil (an evil genius) to finish it where you did (I'll wait for my next birthday to see what happens next ;DD). I love their relationship, and I love how much we gather of how close they are from such few words. And I even love the detail of Lily's monologue about the Beater. I don't even know why..
My most favourite bits from this are: “Why don’t I count?” Hugo said, interrupting a soliloquy on the dreaminess of one of Tutshill’s finest beaters., “Alright, alright! I know you’re a boy.” “Good,” Hugo growled and didn’t retreat. “Because it hasn’t escaped my notice that you’re a woman.” (I'm doing all sorts of Pterodactyl sounds at this!), and the last part, Lily squeaked as Hugo rocked his hips forward rubbing himself firmly against. “Don’t worry, Lily,” He murmured softly into her sweet smelling hair, “This’ll be great. Trust me. Trust me like your daddy does.” Lily buried her face in his shoulder, but from the muffled nosies she made, and the way her bodied moved against his, she did. Completely. I love that "Completely." at the end. It's perfection. And that "Trust me like your daddy does." It's so perfect and hot (why can I imagine his voice in my head so well?), I want to cry.
Daye, thank you so much for this present. (Have I already said that?) I am speechless and in awe and humbled and sososososo happy. Thank you! I loved it far more than I could express here. FAR MORE. God. Thank you so much! What a lovely lovely lovely lovely present! And thank you for the birthday wishes too! You made my day. Thank you! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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Okay, okay, okay. I'm calm and collected and I'm going to leave a calm and collected comment to this absolutely LOVELY present.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!!
Of course I'm not! I'm going to have to do a great effort just to spare you an ALL CAPS review to this, because I am so SUPER excited and you just have no freaking idea!!!!!
First of all, how did you know that this is my favourite pairing?
Haha! Yes, I'm joking.
Oh, God! Have I thanked you already? Have I thanked you enough? I don't think I have, and you'll probably get random "thank you" messages from me throughout your life. This is so lovely and fantastic and I love it so much. SO MUCH.
Okay, calm and collected.. First, I LOVE the setting. And I love this incredibly hot and perfectly characterised and just plain believably little snippet in their relationship. I love the way you develop this, I love that you start from the description of Lily's room (can I just say that my heart was beating furiously already when I read the summary?!), and that that the room gives them an excuse to talk about boys in Lily's room, and that Hugo - God, I love your Hugo - would just show her that he definitely counts as a boy (yes, he does). BTW, you call him creepy, I call him a dom, and I love it.
The frottage is amazing. As always. You write the hottest frottage ever. I noticed that in Quick Puffs of Jollity and I honestly was amazed at how perfect your frottage scenes are. Like, I usually don't even understand it - like understand what most authors write - but you.. God! It's perfect, it's hot, it's gorgeous, it's... it's just plain bloody awesome. I just don't have words to describe it. Honestly. Just don't have words. It's so good. (Hahah, I have to admit that if you were Tam, I'd tell you just what that frottage scene did to me, but I don't think that's very lady-like so l should probably shut up... - Take it as a compliment though!)
I love how you've characterised them - this is so like my headcanon for them it's ridiculous. And I have never thought about Lily with a pixie cut, but now I suddenly want to cut off her hair in all of my fics. I so love that Hugo is the one to take control - well, duh - and I love that Lily would kiss him back like that and trust him completely. By the way, you're both a genius and very evil (an evil genius) to finish it where you did (I'll wait for my next birthday to see what happens next ;DD). I love their relationship, and I love how much we gather of how close they are from such few words. And I even love the detail of Lily's monologue about the Beater. I don't even know why..
My most favourite bits from this are: “Why don’t I count?” Hugo said, interrupting a soliloquy on the dreaminess of one of Tutshill’s finest beaters., “Alright, alright! I know you’re a boy.” “Good,” Hugo growled and didn’t retreat. “Because it hasn’t escaped my notice that you’re a woman.” (I'm doing all sorts of Pterodactyl sounds at this!), and the last part, Lily squeaked as Hugo rocked his hips forward rubbing himself firmly against. “Don’t worry, Lily,” He murmured softly into her sweet smelling hair, “This’ll be great. Trust me. Trust me like your daddy does.” Lily buried her face in his shoulder, but from the muffled nosies she made, and the way her bodied moved against his, she did. Completely. I love that "Completely." at the end. It's perfection. And that "Trust me like your daddy does." It's so perfect and hot (why can I imagine his voice in my head so well?), I want to cry.
Daye, thank you so much for this present. (Have I already said that?) I am speechless and in awe and humbled and sososososo happy. Thank you! I loved it far more than I could express here. FAR MORE. God. Thank you so much! What a lovely lovely lovely lovely present! And thank you for the birthday wishes too! You made my day. Thank you! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥