http://luna-plath.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] luna-plath.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lightofdaye 2013-02-22 05:23 pm (UTC)

You could always go the route of Harry being afraid of getting too close to people because he doesn't understand intimacy, and have him in a series of plateaued relationships. That would make sense to me as a reader.

Love triangles are a classic. I think you could make it work with Al and James, but it would be difficult to get the right characterization for Roxanne, since we know the least about her.

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