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nevrafire ([personal profile] nevrafire) wrote in [personal profile] lightofdaye 2019-07-06 11:22 pm (UTC)

*thumbs up* great job!

I really like the setup of Daphne 'rescuing' Harry from the relentless admirers and that's what leads to the fake dating (which is a guilty pleasure of mine)

as always your characterization of Harry is 10/10. I specially like how even when he's going 'what the hell is going on?" he's still willing to go along with it AND take the lead more than once in making it look convincing.

Also really like how harry, who keeps his emotions so close to his chest, is the first one to admit to real feelings.

and obviously making Draco Malfoy look like an idiot is always a huge bonus,

nicely done daye!

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