:-D Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Dunno I'll write much more. Depends if any more ideas come to me.

Melisadre is a weird character, I was wondering how well I'd done her. It was strange seeing her pop up as point of view in aDwDs since she'd been a quasi-antagonistic character before hand in Davos' point of view.

But yeah I though the kissed by fire for red hair and Thoros' resurrection kiss was a cool connection. I wonder if it's intentional. Still the feory kiss thing isn't exactly fool proof costless as we saw with Beric and Stoneheart. So Jon's probably a little messed up after this.